One Day

One Day

A Poem by Enigma
"

One Day In My LiFe!!

"

Waking up

Trying to brush away the sleep from my eyes

And hoping that the dream I was dreaming

Will become a reality

But everything disappears infront of the hands of the clock

Which seem to be running faster than ever

And I realise that I'm late for my school

Again!!

 

A five minute shower

Two minute hair-do

Three minute dress-up

A second of cursing

And I'm finally ready

 

Halfway to the school

On my bicycle

I suddenly remember that I forgot to bring my home-work

Which I worked so hard to complete

I curse loudly and don't see the huge crack in the road

BAM!

Minutes later, I'm still on my way

Just a few scratches and bruises

And lot's of slangs on my tongue

I finally reach my destination

 

Five minutes scolding

Five minutes walk

And I'm inb my class

Facing my teacher

Who's scolding me constantly

And I'm staring at the wall behind her

 

History...

Maths...

English...

Physics...

BREAK-TIME!!

I finally smile as I rush to my friends

But before I could even smell my food

I dropped it all

 

Three hours later

I'm home again

Eating away the tasteless vegetables my mom served me

And suspiciously eyeing the sweets kept in the corner

 

With half a sweet in my mouth

I rush to my computer

To log in writerscafe.org

To read my reviews

To review my friends

To make new friends

To get new reviews

But the second I click on the link

The computer screen goes blank

Damn! A power-cut!!

 

It's evening and I'm riding my bicyle to my friend's place

Which seems to be locked as no one's answering my bells

or shouts

 

Ah! It's night time

I've had my dinner

I've not done my home-work

I've written three poems

I've not studied three words

And I sleep

Not knowing what tomorrow hel for me

Just looking forward to it

It might be the day when my dream finally came true

© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Ok! This wasn't one of my best pieces. I didn't put much thought into this. Just scribbled out everything I thought.
Please go easy on me if you don;t like it.....^_^

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"Five minutes scolding
Five minutes walk
And I'm inb my class
Facing my teacher
Who's scolding me constantly
And I'm staring at the wall behind her"

LOL... I pictured this as I read it. Kind of like I could hear him/her saying... blah blah blah blah... lol
Your teacher became a Charlie Brown adult... lol

Anywho... as always .... this is great Siya! You have a way of capturing interest
and keeping it when you tell stories! They're awesome!!

Love your work! Keep writing...!!





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"Five minutes scolding
Five minutes walk
And I'm inb my class
Facing my teacher
Who's scolding me constantly
And I'm staring at the wall behind her"

LOL... I pictured this as I read it. Kind of like I could hear him/her saying... blah blah blah blah... lol
Your teacher became a Charlie Brown adult... lol

Anywho... as always .... this is great Siya! You have a way of capturing interest
and keeping it when you tell stories! They're awesome!!

Love your work! Keep writing...!!





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just scribbled out everything...LOL... perhaps you did, but it's so real. Yes I know those sorts of days from my years at school. we called them Mondays, Tuesdays, Wednesdays, Thursdays and Fridays.

Excellent writing, well done. I really enjoyed reading...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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