Confession to the wrong person

Confession to the wrong person

A Chapter by Enigma
"

Oh! No!!

"

I slammed the door behind me as I entered my house in the evening. I couldn't think clearly. My cheeks were still red from my encounter with...

"SIYA!", my mom screamed from the kitchen and before I could run away or even come up with an excuse, she was standing before me.

"Mom..."

"Is this the time to come home?" she boomed.

"But..."

"Do you have any idea how dark is it out there?"

"Listen to me..." I started to get irritated and all the blushing vanished in a second.

"You listen! This house has rules. And if you face so much trouble in obeying them, get the hell out of here."

"That's what I want. To be away from all this nagging..to be away from you!" I screamed at her and ran up the stairs to my room.I closed the door behind me and fell on my bed. My face was red again, so were my eyes. Tears were flowing down like a river and I did nothing to stop them. I just muffled up my cries with my pillow so that she won't listen them. My mom was still screaming at me from downstairs, I could hear her cursing me.

"I hate you!", I said out loud to the walls.

After a while, when the pain faded away, I thought about what happened at Dhruv's place.

I lay down on my bed, closed my eyes and put on my favourite song 'Somebody's Me' at the stereo.

"Oh! HI Siya." he had said in a tone full of sweet surprise when he found me at his door.

Within a second, my whole plan appeared in front of me as to how I was going to make him believe that Amber was lying. But before I could open my mouth or even make a move, my whole plan broke into pieces. Standing behind Dhruv, was none other than my competitor and my current friend cum rival, Amber. I simply couldn't believe my eyes.

"Don't worry", she said pushing him away to make her way "I'm leaving."

When passing beside me, she whispered in my ear "You've lost before you even began" and left with a evil grin on her face.

I had watched her walking her special victory walk where she kind of mixes walking with dancing.

"Come inside.It's really hot out here" he had said still standing at the door.

"Umm...yeah! thanks" I had replied with a weak smile and entered the house, the place I knew I was to leave empty handed.

More than anything else, I remembered the beautiful crockery which was on display in the living room. So intricate, so delicate. I stopped by them and started as is bounded by some spell.

"Beautiful, isn't it?"he had come and stood beside me.

"I agree. Where did you get them from? I don't think you get such pretty stuff around here." I had asked without shifting my gaze from the tea-pot which was in the centre and was the highlight of the display with the the blue curling outlines and flowers all over it.

"You're right. They were a gift from one mom's friends. They're really close", saying this he lead the way.

I had followed him and obseved his house. It was pretty with purple walls and pure white ceiling and beautiful artifacts decorated here and there.

"Siya?" he had called back.

"Oh! sorry..." I hurried up behind him and entered his room.

It had started getting awkward so, to make myself more comfortable, I shifted my personality more to the funny side.

"You're acting like you were expecting me. What's the deal?" I had asked him with a smirk on my face.

"Nothing" saying this he had laughed and motioned towards a revolving chair for me to sit down and he himself sat on his bed.

"Why was Amber here?" I asked trying it to sound just like a normal question. But my insides were twirling at what was to be this question's answer.

"To tell you the truth, your friend is a big liar." he said with a serious expression on his face.

"Liar?" I looked at him with an expression of surprise and anger. I don't like people calling my best friend a liar.

TRRIINNGGG!!!

I came back to my room with my cellphone ringing furiously at my side.

Noticing that it was Amber's number flashing on the dial, I picked up the call and said the oh-so-common word,"Hello"

Before realising it, I went completely mad at her and the next second I was telling her that though she might have talked to Dhruv first but he'll never believe her. Rounding up with all sort of things I ended with a suggestion that we should stop this stupid bet.

"Now atleast reply." I said in a calm tone. Actually, I was quite exhausted after all this thrashing.

"What's the deal?" I heard and unfamiliar voice on the phone.

Completely confused, I asked,"Amber?!"

"No! This is Dhruv. Now tell me what the hell is going on around here!!"

 



© 2008 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Please ingore the typos. I typed it in a hurry to finish the chapter and didn't run the spell check....
I hope I maintained the level of excitement and you enjoyed reading this....^_^

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WHOOOOOOOOOPSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

Man! I hate when that happens! LOL

You are an EXCELLENT writer! I have no doubt that your stories/books/novels will go far! Indeed...
This grabbed me in the beginning and held me throughout, which.. is not easy to do..!

Impressive Siya! Very! :):) I really enjoyed this a lot!

p.s. you shouldn't talk to your mom like that. lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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Hehehe... i like the ending, it made me smile... don't you hate when that happens... luckily i don't have to deal with such things.... now that i said that, i'm going to have something like that happen... I just want to know what is going on and such... agh... Good job! It was a good write :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems you have alot of mixed emo's for your friends, huh?
Well, this was an eagerly awaited chapter, and I can't wait till you write the next one!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You sure know when to end a chapter: at the most confusing and captivating moment ...
I definitely want to know how this will develop!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Best friends can sometimes be like sisters..and you know the saying..(Lord help the mister that comes between me and my sister!)...I thought of that when I read this.
Your plot in interesting..like to see where it leads;)Very intriguing write=)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent write .. leaves the reader wanting more ......

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice little twisted tale Siya, it is difficult to ignore the typos because they distract from the story. Try to revise a bit. You may also want to reconsider using the word 'cum' in the context for which it was used.
Overall a good yarn with a twist end, I think it could be a lot better if you really put your mind to it.
Keep writing and revising, that is the key.
Cheers,
Helen :-))

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awe tell me this is not true... this is just really bad luck. Good write and the twist at the end was unexpected.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That alas is something i have never done. And am thankful for.

Hope you are well hun, and thanks for asking me to read it. had I read any of the others first though not sure, will go back and look. Dawn

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WHOOOOOOOOOPSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!

Man! I hate when that happens! LOL

You are an EXCELLENT writer! I have no doubt that your stories/books/novels will go far! Indeed...
This grabbed me in the beginning and held me throughout, which.. is not easy to do..!

Impressive Siya! Very! :):) I really enjoyed this a lot!

p.s. you shouldn't talk to your mom like that. lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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