I've had enough...

Something about life...

And so it is
My life
Demading more than ever
A small pleasure
Or a great treasure
Oh! Damn this greedy life
It won't let me be at peace
When I
m ready to clutch the arms of death
It pulls me back
And shoves me
Into the never ending list of chores
I try
I sweat
I complain
But in vain
So I try again
This time with much more rigour
And finally finish the job
I ignore the cuts and bruises
And relish my triumph
But Damn you O greedy life
Coz' I know
That there's another duty
Which has to be fulfilled by me
And it lies awaiting
Maybe for eternity
Coz' I've had enough

Author's Note

Ohk....it souds good to me.What do you think???

Reviews

[kurrupted]

Good? this piece is great.Yes! this life is a series of tasks to all that's living, truly it pushes one to the edge to ask "why is there a beginning to every ending and vice versa?"...i have a poem of the same theme here "aint life a b***h?" where i stated "how life moves fast and slow, without a minute to catch the show,how it hurts one to the furthest throw....and then at dawn the c**k crow with more hell sent pursuits to undergo"....well penned, and lovely flow flow too....nice to note the greek proverb "dun spiro spero" (as long as i live i hoped)

[theladyjai]

this is was deep and complex in that it could mean very different things. you have an interesting flow and voice as a writer.