So much suffering

One more random sad poem. Something about hopelessness...

So much suffering

So much pain

Everything lost

But nothing gained

Shed endless tears

Spent sleepless nights

Full of fears

Of battles; of fights

 

 

 So much sorrow

So much pain

Dreams murdered

Feelings maimed

Longing for love

A soft touch perhaps

Not the scolding

Not the slaps

 

 

 So much to lose

So little to gain

I end it here

And later I’ll start again...

 

Author's Note

Well, how was it??

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I wonderful poem about being knocked down and getting back up again.
I too liked the red color, as it helped bring out the convictions in your words.

I think the the spacing between the stanza's was a little to much. Just my opinion.

Other then that, I felt that this was great poem, full of power,inner strength and hope.

Great Write!
Infinity's Shadow

[Wayward Heart]

I like this a lot Siya! Seemingly profound meaning with every word. I can certainly relate to what you have written...fortunately or not. I look forward to reading more of your writings! Awesome stuff!

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

Beautifully written, each line short, sharp, grips a reader's attention. Excellent.

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This is where you became a writer! Congratulations on an emotionally charged piece of writing. I felt it deeply and I believe you will touch many hearts on your writing journey...
Cheers Siya,
Helen :-)))

[ToRnBaByB]

I love this poem, the flow is fantstic. Very nice job ^_^

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I liked it.... But i love depressing poems, they make me happy lol.... This is a good piece I agree with infinity that the spacing was a little much.... But all together this was a great piece.... good job

[Pinky]

it was awesome... great flow and ryhme... great job!

This is good. I liked that you used the color red. Red is supposed to be a power color and I think this poem is very powerful! I liked the last stanza. Great write!