Everyday

Random thoughts

Everyday I fight

Everyday I love

Everyday I pray

To the heavens, above

 

Everyday I fall

Everyday I try

Everyday I laugh

Everyday I cry

 

Everyday I'm silent

Everyday I talk

Everyday I stand still

Everyday I walk

 

Everyday I twinkle

Everyday I shine

Everyday I touch

Upon an unknown dream of mine

Author's Note

I made up the first two verses in my head while I was taking a shower.It all sounded so good that I felt like completing it.I think the result is quite satisfying....what do you think??

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

the poem flows so beautifully :)

Great poem! I like the repeating of the lines. It adds more power to your words. Great poem! You are a very talented writer!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Very good! The repeats worked well and I can relate to your words. :-) Sharon

[alternative_be]

I agree, good built up stanzas, specially by using the same 'Everyday I' construction. It makes your poem's impact stronger. Everyday, we all go through the motions, most of us do not stand still to reflect. You do. That's where showers, among other things are useful for!

[[untitled]]

I like this. It has a great meaning behind the words. I know at times I feel all those things. I think you captured what emotions people go through in a day very well.