So hard to believe

So hard to believe

That everything will be ok

That after being in shadows this long

I'll have a moment of 'day'

 

So hard to see

All the love and care

All the humanity that exists

All the hearts, those are bare

 

So hard to feel

That loving embrace

That comforting touch

That movement of grace

 

So hard to bring out

The person from inside

So hard to carry on

And try to win this fight

 

So hard to be honest

So hard to be true

So hard to be patient

And to decide what to do

 

Author's Note

Hmmm....just the same thoughts but with different words...

Reviews

[alternative_be]

And why not write more works on the same thoughts? Different words can make stand out different nuances or clarify what you want to say. This poem is very clear about where you stand in life and what you want to achieve. I describes very accurately the world we live in.
So many people are using friendly words or promising you the world. Indeed it is hard to believe, but never stop wanting to achieve!

This is good. I think this is very honest. I love that! Good poem!

[Rosary]

I like when ppl put there true thoughts and emotions and that i think you do

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

I feel I have to say, for me, this is the best poem you have posted on WC... not that the others are not good, but this is the sort of poetry I enjoy reading the most. It has cadence, and even more, it rhymes too. It is simple, one doesn't have to rack one's brain trying to understand what the author is trying to say. The repetition of "So hard" really drives the point of the message into the reader's thoughts.
Excellent writing.