Distance

Talks about how onee keeps itself aloof from the bad as well as the good stuff that's out there in the world.In the end, she becomes something totally different from what she really is.

I distance myself from love that's true

I distance myself from people like you

I distance myself from those who care

I distance myself from those understanding stares

I distance myself from the spiritual peace

I distance myself from those who tease

I distance myself from the wonderful embrace

I distance myself from those who win the race

I distance myself from everything I see

In the end, I distance myself...from me...

 

Author's Note

It's short, I know.I tried compressing it all this time to this little measure....did I succeeed??

Reviews

[CDoh]

this one i like, so many words, so much emotion, put into 10 short lines.
rhyme pattern kept me drawn in and attentive throughout the whole peice, i think u succeeded, yes.

[deathbroken]

(to tell you the truth. I did not even know what I was writing. I just like... wrote stuff. hahahahaha)
as i said. ur rhyming. is amazing. hahahaha
i like the rhythm. its very.. nice.
boom boom boom.
=D
well doneeeee