Random Thoughts

I really couldn't come up with a better title! Maybe I should've written this in the author's note...hmm

The sounds that bang inside my head

The cries that tear me apart

The pain that never fades away

It's all there in my heart

 

All the dreams I've ever dreamt

All the lies I've told

All the times I've fought

All the while when I was bold

 

Every feeling; every thought

Every hearty laugh

Every comforting touch

Every memory that breaks my heart

 

So much is going on in my head

So mush I can't disclose

So much I really wanna share

Or I'll go MAD, I suppose

 

I suppress the feeling to shout

To yell at no one

To let the feeling out of my heart

It'll be relieving....fun...

 

Stronger and stronger

Yet locked up inside

The thoughts then simply die

And others gain a new life

 

And so it all continues

Some emotions I do express

But others are buried, fading away

Dead and expressionless...

 

Author's Note

Any suggestions for the title????

Reviews

I like this. I would keep the title. Great poem! Said a lot in a few words!

[MandarinOranges]

'But others are buried, fading away
Dead and expressionless...'

luv it!

as for a title....I like the one you have now.

[Phil Sanders]

Tension?