If I could be...

If I could be...

A Poem by Enigma

I could've been more loving

I could've cared more

I could've easily healed

Some broken hearts for sure

 

I could've been more realistic

I could've stopped living in dreams

I could've struggled in this real world

Know, what I mean?

 

I could've been more faithful

More trustworthy and true

A little bit more honest

My individuality, then, I could prove

 

I could've stopped copying

I could, then, easily see

I could never be like the rest of them

But I could always be more of me...

© 2008 Enigma


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Yes we could have been so much more and yet why can't we just be ourselves and find acceptance?But you put it so well at the end that I could have been more of me brought forth more of myself.Great!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delightfully written ....

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2008

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Enigma
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