Lonliness

A dark poem about...well, LONLINESS!!

This lonliness gets on me

It makes me feel so bad

Like I'll never be happy again

Like forever...I'll be sad

 

There's nobody to turn to

Nobody to call

Nobosy to heal me

Or to avoid my ultimate fall

 

Nothing but silence now

And darkness all around

The night itself is bleeding

Everywhere there's a paining wound

 

Nothing to wish for

Nothing to be happy about

Nothing to be careful for

Nothing to yell or shout

 

Empty place; empty heart

Deprived of every desire

All the feelings shot dead

And all the wishes on fire

 

All the tears ultimately dry

And all the screams become silent

All the feelings fade away

All this makes me frightened

 

Everything's gone now

Happiness becomes less and less

And I sit with myself

Just me and my lonliness...

 

 

Reviews

[John Stussy]

awww, don't be lonely. i am always available to talk, about anything at all lol. you can vent to me and i listen, tell jokes to me, ask for advice... i just plain like to talk lmao. :) don't be so lonely, you don't have to be.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

aww... now i want to cry... I should have read this one first lol it has great emotions but i think that you might get better if you expand your vocabulary a little more... or describe it better... But still it is a wonderful poem! Great job!

[ANUJ]

HEY AWESOME POEM!!!!!!!

[Nely Amorim]

Your depth of feeling in this poem is affective and thought provoking. I hope we see a lot more work from you.