YOU!!

This poems is hopeful, in a funny way.Not really deep but not that shallow either.Honestly, it feels a bit childish...dunno why.Hope you like it... =D

 

You have the talent...go on...sing

You can fly...you have the wings

You can do it, give it a shot

YOU CAN!!! Never say,"I cannot."

 

You have the strength...kick some butts

But make sure...none gets hurt

You have the power to heal the wounds

You're artistic...paint the sky maroon

 

You have it in your mind, jot it down

Pass the thoughts, turn around

Reveal yourself, write what you feel

One that binds you, break that seal

 

Go on...cry, lighten your heart

Be strong, though you're fallen apart

Life's like that, you do understand

Maybe not today, but someday...YOU CAN!!!

Author's Note

HONEST REVIEWS NEEDED!!!!*ahem! that means your review....*...*now!!*...*lolz*

Reviews

[Natasha Ashway]

This is the second 'You' poem I've read under 5 mins and I definitely like this one better. I like the passion you feed into your words, I like how they urge and inspire. We're like-minded :-) coz I wrote a similar poem 'Dance Fly Live' you know.
Nice, straight-to-the-point work.
Thanks for sharing.................x