The Shelved Dreams

The Shelved Dreams

A Poem by Enigma
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Prompt poetry.

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Sifting through the late night whispers
Of forgotten thoughts
Their one more breath of existence


The shelved dreams heave a sigh of relief
Proud in their naked essence
Hazy recollections of a reality
That fell short of their jagged perfection
It takes too long to ponder
What is and what was and how it shall be


Fragments frozen in time
Souvenirs of a mind that knew no limits


Eager to throw off 
The labels of expired validity
Content with the possibility
That the very next moment might be their last


And yet, one glimpse can be their salvation.

© 2013 Enigma


Author's Note

Enigma
Prompt: heave, valid, ponder

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"Fragments frozen in time
Souvenirs of a mind that knew no limits"
I like the thoughts in the poem. Easy to wander off to places in the past. Memories become lessons for us to be different. Hard to find real salvation. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enigma

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)



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"It takes too long to ponder
What is and what was and how it shall be"
Those two lines are my favorite but I regard the whole poem with awe for it's brilliance. You have such a divine language that ultimately flows like silk.




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enigma

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading that. :)
Loved the smooth flow of words! I thought you had some great phrsing in this write, and the meaning of it all is wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enigma

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
KATHY SUE SILLS

11 Years Ago

Welcome!

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