To be in your shoes

What's your shoe size??

First thing i'd do,
if I were put in your shoes,
is tie those laces,
which are pretty loose,
dusting them clean,
is what i'd do thereafter,
cause I wouldn't want people,
to fault me with laughter.
Walk, and walk good,
is third and no less,
so as to leave a print,
that haters can't mess.
The next thing i'd do,
i'll leave it to you,
cause after all,
this, and this is your shoe.

Author's Note

Does this strike you as comedy? I was experiment a style of expression..let me know.
And what's your shoe size?? :)

Reviews

[MadalaJose]

hahahah, comedy or no comedy, you did good on this one. it looks like the poem is deeper than it looks, don't know if it was intentional, or i am a de-constructivist. walking in another person's shoes, sounds like trying to be them. but the way it ends shows that you cant be the other person. I can see an issue of identity and torelance

[Kunda]

Thanks. The line of thought initially was that: in as much as one would want to help/advise another in the way of life, there is only so much that can be done and that in the end it all comes down to the individual. I see what you mean though (and no, it was not intentional), I like that there's a different view to it, thank you for the review..very encouraging.