Fists of Fury

Times are harsh and full of vain

So much stupidity, corruption and pain

A time when man shall lose his hope

And take a toll around the slope

In times like these do we need a savior

A man who will fight or at least endeavor

To bring back the smiles in people's faces

And disappear without any traces

We shan't need no judge, no corrupt jury

All we shall need are fists of fury!

There maybe a time when all hope is incinerated

There maybe a time when we are frustrated

It is then do we hope for a  warrior to rise

A hero who would save us and faith shall suffice

Seems like that day is yet to come

We may face trouble and failures some

A quest so true and loyal and faithful

A hope so innocent so amazing and truthful

We shan't need no judge, no corrupt jury

All we shall need are fists of fury!

Author's Note

I hope y'all understand the message I hoped to convey ^___^

Reviews

[Avanthika]

beautifully written, loved the rhyme scheme.

[Sivgat Hasan]

Thanks a bunch ^^

[yuki]

I get the message very well nicely done :)

[Sivgat Hasan]

Thanks a bunch ^^

[Saviour Knight]

Nice work Well Done well i can express it but this is so good

[Sivgat Hasan]

Thanks a bunch bro means a lot :D

[Dai Hanshou]

The marks, a space is needed after a comma and you needn't use space after a word for exclamatory poem.
Like this: 1 So much stupidity, corruption and pain
2 ...are fists of fury!

[Sivgat Hasan]

Thx for the review and I worked it out ^___^

[Dai Hanshou]

Actually, I'm killing two birds with one stone xD

[Sivgat Hasan]

^____^ !!! I wish you all the best my dear friend