The Death Poem

A dark and beautiful poem.

in my head i hear a wispering voice

he tell me how to

breath

feel

beat

but i don't know what he means

i can't tell i understand

but he says

i have to reach out for the pain

 

i am afraid

everytime i hear that wish voice

i am afraid

everytime he gives me choice

 

but when i slowly pass away

i see his sad eyes look at me

it makes me

breath

feel

beat

but then,

i die.

Author's Note

"Dieing is beautiful."

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So beautifully written, very emotional and I can hear that voice as I read. Awesome:)

[A Risen Heroine.]

Interesting write, well done!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Raindrop]

This is very different and unique. And that's what I love about it. It seems like something is haunting you through the poem. I like the feeling I get when I read this. Really enjoyed it :)

[stars are far]

i enjoyed reading this :D

[snopadelic]

Thats very differmt.

[*[_Natasha_]*]

interesting for sure. i enjoyed reading this

[indu]

its a beautiful poem.. 'he' must be ur conscience.

[Sarah Hobbit]

Very sad, yet it has beauty