[ on display ] County Fair

i dont even

Piece of
M E A T

little cattle struts her stuff
    and
Now ain't she a pretty thing?
    and
She'll win first prize for sure.

s m i l e s, so they'll check her teeth
watch how
clean
and
white
and
straight
    they are.

Look at her thighs?  See how
muscular they are?

They are
Made for running and for
Dancing, and see
How the muscles contract
Under her smooth, clear skin?

she is as hairless as a newborn and
her fancy shoes pinch her feet but
She smiles like they practiced
    beautyispainispainispainfulithurtsbutshush!beautyisworthityes
and everything is good, yes
Everything is going
    exactlyasplanned
smoothly, like her tight skin or her
high small breasts, firm like melons
and, yes, she is ripe,
just right for the plucking
right from the bough

and all of that is her selling point

Author's Note

Advanced critique is awesome~ :D

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

powerful and potent statement on what society views as valuable~ and the inner price paid by one who may aspire to those realistically unattainable heights of perfection~

[S. Georgia]

I'm not the very very best at "advanced critique", I'm more at the beginner level, but words cannot express just how much I love this. It's just the right amount of creepy yet beautiful.