Dear Diary

Dear diary

Do your pages bleed?

When my pen flies across your skin

like the razor flashes across mine

does the open wound pour forth black and blue tears

black and blue

like the hand shaped clouds on the clear sky of the face of my mother?

Does your spine tremble and ache?

When I pick you up

and throw you across the floor

hitting the wall

THUMP

and crashing to the floor

my frustration and anger ejaculated through your painful momentum

do you feel the fear and stress make its way down your back

like an avalanche - cold and sudden - 

like a jittery spider on ice? 

Reviews

[Bunzy]

I like this I read it a few times a picture forms in the mind as your words are read but I agree the use of a strong word like ejaculated is a much . You could have chosen a less visual word there that got the same message across .

[alanwgraham]

I like this a lot - there are hints and ambiguities which leave me with questions. That is good! I'm not sure about the use of ejaculated -the word has very strong connotations! I want to read more - I will!

[Sergei]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :) And I used "ejaculated" specifically because the word has strong connotations; it's a strong word for a poem about strong emotions.