"The Deep & Dark Hidden Feeling"

We worry too much about the things we say and do whenever were near the one we want to see us.

The moment's that have just now seemingly passed by in the span of a blink were grand and yet so troubling.

Constant in being consistent in my over thinking if in what I said was actually witty and funny or should I take this chance and just start running?

Trying earnestly to stay in touch keep myself listening to what she has to say don't turn off and switch gears actually lend your ear.

Got to make this right or you'll find you're still alone for the remainder of this life.

Quick smile! show your fun to be around become that old clown yet with each punchline you feel that you're about to drown from all of this fake nonsense.

You idiotic imbecile don't get cold feet face that sweltering heat don't you dare show your weak ya need to be strong, stoics the only other emotion you can ever be allowed to show.

Quickly now time's a’ ticking now or never but the real question is will you ever?

Reviews

[Shasha]

The thing about the poem is that you are telling yourself to do this, not that. Actually you are guiding yourself too much. Truly said that "We worry about the things -----". You showed it perfectly. The internal voice. I loved it...

[Sir_Anonymous]

Thank you for the read and the short and sweet constructive review with this I must bid adew I'm still writing something new may post it soon.

Sincerely, Sir_Anonymous

[Shasha]

Your welcome! I am waiting for your new writing.

[Sir_Anonymous]

I just submitted my two newest additions for ya to read... Be warned one of them is a tad disturbing even to me... And I'm the one who wrote it too.

Sincerely,Sir_Anonymous

[Shasha]

Thank you!!! I will read it...