Away from home

First poem I've written in awhile, been away from home myself.

I once did know a bright young man
He left his home and bid farewell
Out into the world he traveled
Grate story's did his letters tell

For months he did not grace his home
The sea of life meet him with storms
And he did bravely meet them all
He found new truths in many forms

And on the day that he returned
Now not the same as he had gone
His eyes now had the look of age
Was knowledge that his journey spawn

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

And on the day that he returned
Now not the same as he had gone
His eyes now had the look of age
Was knowledge that his journey spawn

I enjoyed this. This is what I imagined leaving the country would be like. Returning with a sort of wisdom that is not easily acquired where you currently live. Great write :)

[Brandon Wilson]

Thankyou, I took some of the ideas for this poem from the past 6 months of my life I've been in training so I've learned some new things seen some new places and have a little bit different perseption of things now.