Bath Experience

These hot drops sizzle,
As my fingers shrivel.

As my hair falls loose
And my nails get soft.

As the back of my hair dampens
And soon becomes soaked.

My head falls back, and will soon submerge.
I close my eyes and start thinking deeply.

Scenarios and visions run around my head,
Thoughts poor into my brain like "Wait am I already dead?"

I soon raise up and realize this is no longer hot water,
It has chilled and it's starting to bother...

I drain out the cold and in with the hot,
Should I get out out now?

Nah, probably not...

I hang my arm out
And my cat comes about..

He licks water off my fingers with his sandpaper tongue...
And he sometimes just lingers, guess it's him having fun?

I pull my hand in, my cat decided to leave.
He didn't even say thanks for the water gosh that's my pet peeve

I grab my soap bar, turn my body into suds,
I rinse it off, my water is now clear as mud.

I decide to get out, "Man, I've been in here too long".
I dry off, Wait a second...

Something's wrong. I look at my tub.
My shampoo hasn't moved.

It's Axe by the way, and it's sitting right there

In sorrow I could only stare,
and think to myself


"Why didn't I wash my hair?"

Reviews

[Veronique]

Lol...that's because you were too danged busy enjoying all that relaxing and the 'visions' going on in your head darlin'...;)

[SirMangosven]

Haha I guess so! Sometimes they just become overwhelming ;)

[Veronique]

I reckon they must've been some pretty danged good ones at the time huh...lol ;) Just teasin' country boy! Just couldn't help myself...lol

[SirMangosven]

Hhaha they probably were, I was probably feelin somewhere close to as good as I feel talking to you ;) but visualizing just makes it so much better ;)

[Veronique]

Aww bless your sweet lil' ol' heart...shucks if you didn't go and make this country girl smile!

[SirMangosven]

Everyone needs a smile every once in a while :)
The messages you send go right into my ear,read moreEveryone needs a smile every once in a while :)
The messages you send go right into my ear,
They play like a love song and it's all I can hear. :)

[SirMangosven]

Sorry that was pretty dumb lol

[Veronique]

lol...you are too funny