Where Words Are Not Needed

Liquor on my lips
    Your scent on my breath.
       Come on, babe,
          We're nothing but young.
              And I've got terrible ideas
                 Of reckless and wild things
                     We can only do together
                         In dark, hidden places.
I want to intertwine
   Your body with mine.
      Bound with rope
         Tie our two souls together
            I want to see what colors we can make
                As we wrap our bodies tighter and tighter
                     Let's slip into lover's ways
                         Where no more words are needed.

Reviews

[charlie]

The structure you gave to this piece really amplifies the reading, doesn't it.
I like that. And the intense intimacy comes through.

[MAC]

wholly smoke batman........triple WOW. this has amazing flow to it....that induces a rapid breath, simulating this lust driven piece.