A Cherished Memory

A Cherished Memory

A Poem by Sir Joseph
"

Just came back to my mind

"
Can you read it one more time,
I really dont want you to go.
Read it like Grandpa did,
Ask him, he would know.

Im sorry son its getting late,
Its far past your bed time.
Cuddle up with Rosco here,
And he'll calm your racing mind.

Are you sure you cant mom,
Just once more to hear;
Hear of Grandpa's love for me,
And how he wishes he was here.

Dont worry your little head,
You will see him once more.
Just dream the night away,
He is safe on heaven's shore.

Your mothers right you know,
Oh Joey dont you see,
Im here with The Lord;
Watching over thee.

© 2013 Sir Joseph


Author's Note

Sir Joseph
Let me know what you think, i know iv put alot up today ha

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This, in my opinion, is one of your best writes. Excellent job well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Ethale Captor

11 Years Ago

No problem.
I lost my grandmother just over a year ago.. Nostalgia is a powerful thing. What we'd do just to see them once more, if only in a dream.. I love your perspective change from one verse to another. You have perfected this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you! And yes nostalgia is a powerful thing, i am comforted though that i will see him in heave.. read more
Ohhhwillow

11 Years Ago

Unfortunately I find that I cannot have this comfort. I do not see god, or religion in general as a .. read more
Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

I am sorry that you do not believe you can have this comfort. So i shall not brag or go on how wonde.. read more
Well written piece, you managed to show the love of the ones who are not here anymore...great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
my father passed away in 06....i often get a visit in my dreams. it is never that far away, is it? lovely write here, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

No it is not :) and thank you!
like the use of two voices writing to me
love the content very endearing truly
love how the last words are sent to you from heavens gate from a voice you remember but can no longer actually hear...beautiful
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
That is so sweet! I am thankful that my grandpa is still alive and this poem makes me realize how lucky I am! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you!:) cherish every moment!
This is quite nice...I hope to see my own grandfathers...though both were atheists...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you. It was a touching meeting. And i am comforted by the fact that i know i will see mine aga.. read more
Well written I loved the complex yet simple structure your grandfather was a wonderful man from what I hear and you will see him again:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you! and even in death he is a role model:)
This is a sweet poem, it is so easy to miss loved ones that has already gone but what great peace in knowing you will see them again ^^

Great Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


~*~Peace Keeper~*~

11 Years Ago

lol yep
Marie

11 Years Ago

Don't worry your little head/You'll see him once more/Just dream the night away/He's on Heaven's sho.. read more
Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Ahh thank you very much!!

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