Trust

Trust

A Poem by Sir Joseph
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The subject has heavily been on my mind lately so i took literally 7 minutes and decided to write this.

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You fight with all your might,
Yet you still fear the night.
You know the key to it all,
Yet you won't trust your knight.

You are afraid of the fall,
And the pain that it will cause.
But you still keep building,
Building a tormenting wall.

You say its just a feeling,
But it is something seething.
Simply look to the center,
Just keep on peeling.

Don't let me be a hinder,
Stay strong and surrender.
Surrender to the King,
What you constantly let linger.

Lift your voice and sing,
Look down at the ring.
You are not alone in this fight,
You have a knight my queen.

© 2013 Sir Joseph


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Sir Joseph
Tell me what ya think! :) Reviews and critiquing welcome!

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Loved it! You really digged deep into your feelings!

Posted 9 Years Ago


i think every woman remembers being that little princess, waiting for her knight in shining armor to rescue her . the fact that you touch upon this very feminine fantasy shows that you have a romantic heart. this is cleverly written and nicely worded. well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Oh Thank you! :) Glad you liked it!
good writing
content is interesting
you have a knight my queen-very loving strong statement
thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

It was written out of love and thank you! :)
Good read and write. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Truly beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme and the message :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you!:)
StayAnchored

11 Years Ago

You're welcome! :D
I am sure she will love this one if she has not read it already. I like the interesting rhyme scheme as well. Overall a nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thanks! She did:)
Ethale Captor

11 Years Ago

I figured as much, excellent job.
beautiful! so full of warm tenderness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!:)
This is an amazing poem - you are a great writer

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
Sweety thank you so much!!:) I absolutely love you:) this is amazing:) great job:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Joseph

11 Years Ago

Aww :) you are welcome!:) and thank you!!
marie

11 Years Ago

Anytime sweety:)

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Added on March 7, 2013
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Tags: trust, knight, King, queen, fight, WeMust

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Sir Joseph
Sir Joseph

Laurel, MS



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