"Silence"

Laying beside these lusting sheets

full with young flesh yearning to give but the silence prevails

I hold you, still, silent, there is something wrong

And you say not to worry about it, Well it's impossible not too, love

These eyes wait patiently for the words, but the sun and stars just spin on, on

And i'm confused of what to do, It's chaos, it's my world, My

Arms wanting to hold your soul and captivate you for all time, on my mind

why you fear to let go and give your entire body to me, I need you

I break apart from the inside, This silence

It kills me slowly, The waiting

It will make me stronger, The passion

The love, will never fade with these tears

As i hold on, for an eternity

To hold you, And have you hold me

As the world decays around our living love

 

Reviews

[SoulofManyFaces]

The first line was really strong for the rest of the
poem. When you say Silence, in my opinion you are
talking about saying the words "I love you."

[Bridgett]

wow! I really like this a lot! I can understand where you are coming from and it is very heart felt. Excellent writing!

[Mikayls]

I really liked it!!!
Great job =]