"Are you sure"

Thoughts are way to mangled with everything around me

blurred you sit sobbing for the loss of your heart

Stolen, Beaten, and bruised from each false lovers touch

The marks are not seen on your outer shell

But linger deep within your soul, making you wonder and it

Makes you question the little things in life that seem so simple

How a gesture like a small hug, or kiss seem so small yet

You think... is it real?, closing off the world one thought at a time

Singing of how this world is darker then it appears

Do the masses really see what is going on, Open your eyes

Please take your hearts out of your asses, And put some compassion into the world

But This compassion will not have any reward, no-one cares if you're nice

Mainly most people dont have true honest hearts, And I for one dont have the most honest heart

My thoughts and feeling are way to random to have any clue of what is going to happen at one moment

So look inside yourself and see, Really truelly see who you are

And know for sure That who you are is really you

Live outside the normal walls that hold us in perfect time

Go out of the way and against the grain

and always ask if you're sure

Are you Sure?

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lightfalls]

Oh interesting..."is it real?"..."are you sure?"...questions that beg for answers, especially when someone has been hurt.

[Princess Jess]

doug, this is a beautiful poem....
your amazing remember that:D
-Jessica-

[Darl1ng N1kk1]

Very good, I really like it. I can also relate.

[Dionysus Cain]

interesting, very interesting. I see some anger in this poem, i've questioned if it was real for years. i like this poem,i can relate..