My Soul Shouts while My body weeps

A battle from Day to day

My Soul Shouts, Will It be Heard

My Body Weeps with no hope of console

We live day wondering when our end shall come

No one knows but you, I can't believe i doubted you

My Soul itself is apart so in doubting you I doubt Myself

I think of my body as my our the tears no from pain but from fear of the next life

Fear of an Endless Fire But i have learned To believe in everything you and told me

My Soul shouted you heard its cry

My body weeped and you Wiped the tears

Reviews

[Smirking Poison]

Brilliant descriptions and flow and symbolism here - sorta reminds me of something by Linkin Park, where his soul screams, desperate and longing to be heard, and having his call answered in the end :D

[Lovely Lady]

Good work... keep writing... just feel and express... I love it.
~♥~

[R.C.A.]

such great description

[darkgurl]

words so well expressed...really enjoyed your last two sentences. wonderful write!

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I like this.. it has a lot emotion.. keep up the good work..