How I Am Free

Every time I think I wonder at your grace.

Every time I breathe in pain,

You remind me of Your name.

It is by Your love I am free.

Every night I see the stars

You remind me of Your forgiving scars.

With each passing day and constant heartbeat

You prove Your love just by being.

With each cloud and gentle wind

You free the chains of my innate sin.

By Your wonder and majesty

Your message of faith moves: convicting.

"Come back to me,"

Was your dying plea.

"Don't let me go," I ask so deep.

It's by your love that I am free.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism, please.

Reviews

[Red Raven]

As a passer by i cannot give any constructive criticism but i would like to say that your poem really help me to gain hope .
I recently had a major car accident and by His grace i survived but with scars so horrific that people wince when they visit me. My stitches are still fresh but the reality of how close i was about to lose my life still fresher. Every now and then i traces those scars on my lips, temple, eyes...and i shudder with hopless despair. Every stiches remind me of the past life i had taken, the cold heart, anger, injustice but your Poem made me somehow realise that He is calling me.It gives me Hope.
Hope to live and thank Him for whatever happened.
Hope to be a better human being.
Hope to be Loved.

Thank you.