Life

Life

A Poem by Hope
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This was written after a pro-choice/pro-life debate a friend of mine and myself had

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The very minute I was alive, my mother was scared

When I was one, she barely know I was there

      But my Heavenly Father helped me, and gave me life

When I was two, I knew there was a lot of growing left to do

When after a month, she finally knew that I was alive

I didn't know, let alone understand what was going on

One minute there is some murmuring, the next there's yelling

         there is only one person helping me:  My Father

© 2008 Hope


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look foward to the finished thing. pls let me know when its done. little confused though. r u talking about ur parents fighting. cause if so i know how u feel. but i had no one. i've even lost my faith in god. but i have my reasons. nice job. o n told u i'd read all of them. lol.
luv ya
ur friend Aileen

Posted 16 Years Ago


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