Dream

If only they would realize you have a soul, a personality, and that you existed....

Looking out and seeing the sun

My eyes veering on the vast horizon

Standing there on the balcony

Anticipating his accompany

 

Practicing

Reciting

Exaggerating

Missing

 

Longing

 But, knowing that you two belong

 

You never quite knew just who I was

Now I wish...i wish you well

 

The many years flew by

Never catching a glimpse from my eye

Yet there you were

While i stood in a blur

Author's Note

Constructive criticism please

Reviews

[Aileen]

nice. i dont now wut Exaggerating means. but it sounds nice, good flow rythem. uhm.... im confused were ur going. like at th begging it sounds like hes standing next to. but at th end it sounds as if hes w/ sum one else. but i do like it. keap up th great work
luv ya
ur friend Aileen