Wake Up

I wrote this for my english class

     The Sun rises and the old self starts to feel the roars deep within the earth-

  the rock trembles at His present glory rising, the trees swaying to the praises of our Creator. 

All of the evil trembles at the presence of God Himself, yet simultaneously,

the pureness of  one's  heart becomes renewed and encouraged

to live just one more extrodinary life.

     Laying on the ground one's body lays,

sleeping in peace, awaiting the day.  

Inch by inch His presence comes,

the energy building and brewing deep down in my soul. 

All the energy, excitement, and every bit of one's

conciousness longs for that Heavenly light.

Memories of all know acquaintances start being recalled

and from them, it gives birth to energy. 

His very presence gives one's body guidance-

how to use that energy to live in wisdom and reverence.

     All in all, the energy builds up and wakes our very being,

waking us up to the day worth living.

Author's Note

please give me tips so that it may flow more

Reviews

[Aileen]

i like. cant realy. srry. never written anythinbg like tht b4., but vrry nice. keap up th great work. what was ur grade on it?
luv ya
ur friend Aileen

[CherryBlossomGirl]

I like the way you think about God. I believe in Christ too, and religion is present in my works ( still have to upload them here ). The favorite part, the one that really reflects the "situation" is "Inch by inch His presence comes". So true!