Anticipation

I hope and I dream

I pray and and I seek

Through all my days

    I am looking

All I have to do is look at your word

Every time I think about him...

    I pray for the best

Every day I think about my mother...

    I hope and cry for her

 

I close my eyes and invision the throne

When I see the throne...

   I remember the battle victory

                    and hope for him

In my dress I walk through the woods

                 the crown placed to my right and kneel down

  I pray, cry, yearn for and see him

  coming to me...I wake up and no

  one is around me in the grassy forrest

     My spirit is

        ready

                 I look up

                              the driving rock in the background

  The diamonds and jewels are there as battle wounds healed over

 

 

   I AM FREE!

       there he is

Reviews

[InkBlack]

I personally thought it was good.
Is it supposed to be a religious poem? Because that's the impression I got from it. It also came across as a poem about someone dealing with the death of their mother and how their father is in a battle. It kind of reminded me of the middle ages almost.

All and all, it's a good piece of work. You could fix the way that it's typed, but that's just a minor detail.