Psychiatric Treatment

~F**k the attention Embrace the pain& aggression

Skip school And break all the rues

I'm a teenager F*****g up my life is my major~

I made a choice

Shut up! Its time for you to hear my voice

Hear my screams

Don't try to crush my dreams

Hear me shout

I love who I've become without a f*****g doubt

I'm crazy, some say psychotic

Treat it with narcotics 

The government tries to control what they don't own

My rebellious ways against them have grown

Spread the anarchy

The hell with democracy

Stop funding wars

And feed the poor

The rebels are back

Love is something we lack

~F**k the attention Embrace the pain& aggression

Skip school And break all the rues

I'm a teenager F*****g up my life is my major~

Begin the riot

Your scared as hell, don't deny it

Clap your hands

Let them know what we demand

Stomp your feet

Its people like you who we must defeat

We have rights

We won't go down without a fight

I suggest you stop showing off that college diploma

If you don't wanna end up in a deep coma

Light them cancer sticks

Yes were crazy, sadistic& sick!

Bring in the booze

Watch us drink in victory as we win& you lose

Author's Note

For those of you who don't know:
Cancer stick: Cigarette
Booze: Beer

Reviews

[AndyJCash]

Very energetic, very empowering. Such a good poem, I was entertained from start to finish!

[李[A]]

This was quite intensifying. It's quite dark, but at the same time playful in a way. Good job!

[natalia4]

i love it!!!! it shouts the ideas so many contain and does it in a fun way

[Inyourshadow]

I prefere coffin nails as a slang term for cigerettes myself lol, love the phycotic narcotic lines and the diploma coma these so scream your veiws and the veiws of the many. Excellent message of a world gone mad whre the ones supposedly sane rule over us. Excellent, keep em' coming

[OtherWorldWoman]

We should all be radical!!! I am this way as well. It was inspiring and empowering and made a point. I love it and totally agree. Well done!

[Nath]

I like it, its rebelliousness *thumbs up*
Keep it up! :-)

[WritersSoul]

:D I really LOVE this poem, man!! I love it :D

[Fracturing_Butterflies]

I really like this! And congrats on the contest!!