Unfixable

Um its no good at all but I just decided to put it here from my old account

Yes you the one who fixed my heart 

And the one who tore it apart 

For me you never cried

To me you always said goodbye 

Each time you came back my heart always got stabbed 

In me you never gave a damn crap 

It was like you always gave me a slap

Before you left every time I gave you a kiss 

But once you walked outta the door you removed it from your lips 

I always told you I love you 

But all you thought was I think I do

What a fool of me 

To not be able to see

What you did you 

I can not forgive 

Why? 

I'm not going to lie 

But why fix the torn apart 

Cause if you don't do it then your very smart

Because just like suicide the torn apart can not be repaired

No matter how much people pretend to cry in reality no one will ever really care..

Author's Note

so yeah not much to say but i was thinking bout my family and all my back stabbers

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

In our deepest darkest areas of despair are our most promising places of growth.. I don't know how many times I've wanted to end it all and wake up refreshed with a different viewpoint the next day.. What if I would have made that mistake? I wouldn't have met all of you...xx :) Great write..x

[paradise]

hmm i love this its actually amazing soo good i love :D

[Dove]

I like how you expressed your feelings in this. good job

[Inyourshadow]

So many false friends and haters making life a nightmare and so often it seems to be the ones closest to us causing the hurt, you penned the depth of pain perfectly especially love the removing my kiss line. Keep em' coming

[sadjgrey]

very emotional poem here,but pretty good way to express feelings

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is a wonderful poem, I like it a lot...
Well penned and thank you for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Chris]

Actually it says a bit about you.