Sky Shimmers

inspiration NeverShoutNever!

I woke up with the strangest feeling 

I looked in the mirror& you were there your star like eyes staring into my eyes 

You looked so real 

I walked to the tallest mountain where we once use to stare at the stars for hours& hours 

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Memories, my thoughts are filled with you 

I wouldn't give up anything 

You broke my heart when you left but that changes the fact that I love you 

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Love& affection that's what you use to be, the closest thing I had to love was you 

Where ever you are don't forget how much you meant to me 

I'd do the same mistakes again just to see you again 

I'd wake up to you singing to the top of your lungs over& over again 

I'd read all your love letters until I memorized them... 

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Your not here anymore 

When i feel your hand over mine I know your just my imagination 

The best of times was when you were here 

You'll be the most important part of my life 

Every flower reminds me of you

Every cloud... 

I see your face

~~~

Help me not shed a tear 

Help me wake up..

I don't wanna leave but i have to..

its time i realized your gone 

~~~

but i'm alive

Reviews

[OT]

nice job! great rhymes too - well done!

[Starry Eyed]

Good flowing poem :) Love this!

[李[A]]

Very nice structure

[sadjgrey]

another good poem,i like your writing style

[Max]

Beautiful poem and I love the ending

[light and ashes]

I love the ending "its time i realized your gone but i'm alive." One of things about human beings is our ability to overcome. Great and beautiful poem.

[Solitary Dreamer]

I love this bc it reminded me exactly of how I feel :/

[WritersSoul]

It's very captivating and beautiful, i LOVE IT!!! It's very emotional, keep writing!!

[nevershoutnever.]

Perfectly captured, totally relatable. I love it