Sky Shimmers

inspiration NeverShoutNever!

I woke up with the strangest feeling 

I looked in the mirror& you were there your star like eyes staring into my eyes 

You looked so real 

I walked to the tallest mountain where we once use to stare at the stars for hours& hours 

~~~

Memories, my thoughts are filled with you 

I wouldn't give up anything 

You broke my heart when you left but that changes the fact that I love you 

~~~

Love& affection that's what you use to be, the closest thing I had to love was you 

Where ever you are don't forget how much you meant to me 

I'd do the same mistakes again just to see you again 

I'd wake up to you singing to the top of your lungs over& over again 

I'd read all your love letters until I memorized them... 

~~~

Your not here anymore 

When i feel your hand over mine I know your just my imagination 

The best of times was when you were here 

You'll be the most important part of my life 

Every flower reminds me of you

Every cloud... 

I see your face

~~~

Help me not shed a tear 

Help me wake up..

I don't wanna leave but i have to..

its time i realized your gone 

~~~

but i'm alive

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to realize a person had left your life. Leave a sadness for a while. Like your ending. We must accept and look for something good in our life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Groovy]

An enchanting read

[Boldpen]

Brilliant write.
The determination and never say never spirit of the poem made it a real treat for mind.
Great Job!

[BeccaB]

brilliance ^_^

[Manpreet]

A very delicate expression so honestly presented through this poem!

[Cassie Fraga]

love the punch line at the end! very nice read... keep it up!!

[Seshat Nidaba]

This was so good, it was full of this vivid urgency, a spilling onto the page of unaltered emotion.

[Me]

stunning verse...as always from your pen...beautiful

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

I really love the visual of this. I don't see many like this. It's inspiring. Nice job.

[WindSong]

It's a sad and heartfelt poem of loss. Your heart aches from the sorrow you feel. It's expressly written! Well done!

WindSong