Who Is She?

so i wrote this at 12am it had just came to me. and also i was in the bathroom just looking at my reflection asking myself....who am i??? so anyway it would be nice enough if you rate and send me some

She looks at herself in the mirror And sees a beautiful girl

Who is now cease to exist 

She tries to clean out the mirror and actually see herself 

But is is afraid to because it breaks her heart to see her self gushing red from head to toe 

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Who Is She?

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She breaks the mirror shattering to the ground falling in pieces

She turns off the light to escape, but her green glowing eyes light her up in the darkest of times

She tares and scratches at her eyes, but no help

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 Who Is She?

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                       Her mind deceives her and she cant keep control

She runs away from that old wooden barn to escape it all 

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Who Is She?

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        She stops and stands still in the middle of the road with nothing to do 

She falls to the ground and starts crying 

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Who Is She?

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     She cries because she realizes how horrible and how wrong she was

She wishes to be there for someone, when she cant even be there for herself

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Who Is She?

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                                                    She is forgotten 

She cant think straight and cant make a decision because shes lost all trust and confidence in her

Reviews

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For some reason I get the image of headlights in the last paragraph. Perhaps it was the barn reference. You should do a quick check for spelling, grammar, etc. because I found a bunch of errors.
Nice poem, good work.