Greater Things

Greater Things

A Poem by R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
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I wanted to write what empty feels like. Maybe a dream is what waking is. Maybe nothing is all something can be.

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Greater Things



 

Lukewarm-hearted cathedrals of Sheol

Sanguine phoenixes of double-helixes

Torpischorean Prometheus disobedient incohesive guillotines

To the scrawling hollow halogens

Of an ominous hallelujah

Of the crumbled angelic steampunk penumbra

Homunculus sunken in the phosphorescent pestilence

In the seafloor’s bottomless door of rigour mortis

Incorporeal agoraphobic in its morbid forebear

Of kaleidoscope endorphins blackest alabaster

Cataclysms risen from the superstitious schisms

We imprisoned in our ventriloquism

Infinite labyrinthine christened in photosynthesis

The chrysalis drifting eviscerating precipitation

Pouring orchestras of encores metamorphosis

Intercourses divorcing pandemonium

The corroded chrome chthonian

Symposium decomposing open wounds diplomacy

Sown interwoven poetry, phatasmagorical chlorophyll’s cornucopia

Copious sociopathic wrathful rapturous chronological anthologies

Monoliths of metabolical Holocaust soft in the apocalypse

Of docile apostles in the coffins

Of their esophageal promised land

Disenchanted pantheons amaranthine catatonic lobotomies

Godfathers of goddesses transmogrified diabolical bride

To the serpentine birth rites polycrystalline hieroglyphics lies

Twined by twilight’s isolation cremating constellations agathion

Graphite stars of cinnabar armadas scimitar vibrato

Minotaur aficionados of the midnight charred belladonna

Nirvana’s archipelago eldritch arpeggios

Machiavellian demiurge clergies of purgatory’s Orpheus

Tartarus reincarnated arbitrary chariots

Bearing marionettes effigies iridescent resuscitating

Escalations in the multicoloured tundra of subdivisions

Tongues of thunderstorms envisioned superstitious

Omnipotence Icarus falling through a symphony

Glistening epiphany inquisition relinquishing on the wings of greater things

Basilisks ecclesiastical masquerade sacrilege blasphemy’s rhapsodic melodrama

Ventilating experimental extraterriestral espionage sabotaging onomatopoeia

Valedictorian to the metempsychosis of waltzing poltergeists uprising hierarchy

Raising spirits as if they were our own

Chronological semiautomatic throwing shotgun weddings among the straitjacket catacombs alone

Greater things call from the mention of Armageddons parhelion rising in the mourning son

Clouds of mangled ballerinas catapulting through summer solstice unravelled scavengers of avenues

Sidestreets free from the outpour of drumming feet on this hollow earth

Thumping hearts beating the steel exoskeleton of the skyscraper graveyard’s cymbals

Elysium’s graffiti amputee’s canopy lycanthropy gripping photosynthesis of deceased Prometheus

Grey Mayflower’s dowry hallowed be thy halleluja thy kingdom come and gone

Serpentine archives chandelier crowning the glass castles in the skyrise cage

Compendiums, chronicles, flowers of the crushed dreams that cover the faces of asphalt cliffs

Drowning airborne falling tall-growing stagnant alone as one many, gone

The pale halo of a nightingales railroad racing across the tracks we left behind in our wake





Sleeping together, apart, whole and broken, hollow and full of memories, regrets, songs

Things that do not matter, bones that do not live, lives that do not pass, never arriving

Never leaving, never anything, or anyone, never left behind, only a memento not to be considered

One death amidst the nothingness was never there to begin with

There are no more stories

There are no greater things than the weight we carry being lifted, no longer burden nor strength

No longer sorrow nor uplifting, no longer worth my time

No words or rhyme

Alone in an empty nothing that means nothing to those who understand nothing to be nonexistent

Lukewarm-hearts built to drown and die

Built to not be known

Built not to be a structure

Walls that never got the chance to crumble were never walls

You cannot hold me in this meaning, if no one else, nothing else, will ever come to understand it

It might as well have never been

The meaningful death will never live in the hearts who hear mute

The trees may wither or bear fruit

But they will never bear necessity

They do not matter

They never were worth the nothing that they are

No God will listen to silence

No silence will hear God

And if you create nothing, does it truly exist?

Is it known to you

Does it matter if something becomes nothing?

Will nothing be together in the lukewarm hearts

Will we disappear from the blank page like a poem being unwritten backwards?

Leaving view, not to ever be seen

Will nothing be looked at like a photograph?

Or a frame

Will every one of you die alone

Free of form

Free of you

Will your screams be silenced?

Or were they nothing but silence to start with

Ending the same beginning

Coming apart left intact behind all these faded feathers

Surrender your phoenix

Flame has gone colder than the nonexistent void

Cold was never felt

Empty was never full

Full wasn’t there to begin with

Is there truly a greater thing

Than a song never heard

That never was a song

Because no one had heard song

Because no one had heard nothing

The only thing no one could miss

Missing still not yet nonexistent




Proud Nobodies





Every day rose and fell, like petals, flowing, unravelled spirals

Isn't it beautiful?

Face off with the masked men

Their highest hopes

Your deepest despair

Your nothing is their everything, isn't it?

They wish they were half as free

Burdened to be something

Never one, just many, flakes falling

From the decaying surface

The abyss they couldn't scratch

The heaven we left behind

Is their hell

We've all been denied our promised land

Every day rose (to Valhalla) and fell (in battle)

Like petals, flowing, unravelled spirals

Isn't it beautiful?

Aren't the flowers still?

In this moving picture of Memory Lane?




© 2020 R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)


Author's Note

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
I promise I read every single review, and I generally will reply to them. I look forward to my next review, because it helps me learn. Even if it's just one word, I promise, I will be happy to hear anything you feel needs sharing. Whenever you write on my shortcomings or breakthroughs, or the themes of my poems, or share ideas and friendly criticism, it decides my next poem to an extent. I will listen, learn and be thankful. And 99% of the time, you'll get a reply unless you're trolling me.

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this is an analyst wet dream and nightmare... Mr Sin the outflow of your imagery is nothing less than chaos in cuneiform on the stone tablets of losses lost language! to truly tear this apart and frame these images in your description is a daunting task but to feel the lines is another and in the description of that for me Is a mind of constant murmur and I do not feel an air of emptiness lest it be in the continuous cacophony of influx making its ownership nullified. intermixed in these lines are a great many fine images and thoughts as is the case for your work very often. but in truth the framework can be a bit of a foreign albeit familiar tone within them. For as you dive into the chaos the Bunny dives into the clarity from meditation in ponder so as much as we are similar out methodologies are so polar opposite but I did enjoy reading the contrast...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Happy to hear you found the poem interesting. I don't know if I've written something quite like this.. read more



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The first half of "Greater Things" felt like the most solidly-concentrated collection of complex words ever amassed by anyone. Normally I have a high tolerance for complex words, compared to most people (people complain that I use too many, but I use very few compared to you!) So, the overall effect of an unending flow of back-to-back complex words ends up being a form of NOTHINGNESS! When the eyes glaze over & they are moving across the words like walking a rocky path, but no longer seeing the individual rocks, instead delving into that place where we watch ourselves reading more than watching the words going by.

The second half of the first section wisely takes a turn toward conversational, as we needed some relief from the earlier complexities. The way you delve into NOTHINGNESS actually serves to make NOTHING into SOMETHING! It's like when a kid acts out & gets the attention he's craving. This section feels childlike & insistent, uneasily dissatisfied with answers not forthcoming to all his questions. Your mind can embrace much more questioning than most people -- one section of one of your poems can question the hell out of life in ways that most people have never done in a lifetime. Most people make it an artform to AVOID questioning life by adopting "pat" answers for everything. We definitely get the strong understanding that this probing narrator is NOT going to settle for any pat answers!

For the final section, I'll just say I love these lines:
"Your nothing is their everything, isn't it?
They wish they were half as free
Burdened to be something" . . .
people who are enslaved by the incessant need to fill the "nothing" with "something" (often addictive consumerism) are very threatened by people who do not need this to be happy & so they point to the ones shirking consumerism norms, calling us "nothing" becuz we have nothing & we aren't even motivated by amassing a bunch of dumb "something". I run into this alot with my friends, since I live a pretty simple life, being poor & being a loner in the wilderness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

I’m sorry I took so long to get back to you, I’ve been dealing with depression and some writers .. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

No worries. As a bipolar, I regularly go underground rather than spread my vile outlook when I'm dow.. read more
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

I have schizoaffective, a mix between schizophrenia and bipolar. I think it makes us unique in our w.. read more
Very great poems about nightmares. Nightmares are the worst, I love your image you created!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jung Lee! Always happy to share a poem with you. :)
NotUsinganymore

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Me too! Feel ffree to read my new poem! c:
R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

I will definitely do that. :)
SIN,the most common thing we do,great imagery

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed the poem wordman, sin, but also the triviality of an existence, sin, virtue and the.. read more
 wordman

4 Years Ago

of course,many factors i guess,you`re welcome
this is an analyst wet dream and nightmare... Mr Sin the outflow of your imagery is nothing less than chaos in cuneiform on the stone tablets of losses lost language! to truly tear this apart and frame these images in your description is a daunting task but to feel the lines is another and in the description of that for me Is a mind of constant murmur and I do not feel an air of emptiness lest it be in the continuous cacophony of influx making its ownership nullified. intermixed in these lines are a great many fine images and thoughts as is the case for your work very often. but in truth the framework can be a bit of a foreign albeit familiar tone within them. For as you dive into the chaos the Bunny dives into the clarity from meditation in ponder so as much as we are similar out methodologies are so polar opposite but I did enjoy reading the contrast...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)

4 Years Ago

Happy to hear you found the poem interesting. I don't know if I've written something quite like this.. read more

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Burlington, Halton, Canada



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