2019 February 13th, Wednesday
A Chapter by R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
Second day with time on my hands, and binding myself with absent-minded rhyming. Or maybe that just means that I actually have a mind? Thankful for that. Would suck if I didn't.
Day by Day 2019 February 13th, Wednesday
I keep my soul in my pants pocket orphanage these days
The cold abortion cradles my morbid formulas of emotions
Chemicals symmetrical yet unbalanced, unbroken, forged my war words, move on forward
They lost their will to fight, these people
And abandoned me here like the Ten Commandments of fear
My features growing bleaker, on the lonely bleachers
The cars parade like Saturday, serenaded, waiting patiently, the roads ancient beings, anchors of society, the traffic lights beckons quietly of solitude calling you longingly
The world philosophical in every molecule, soft and fragile, stagnant like my follicles, a child in the suburban foliage
A boil on the soil
The snow swallowed my feet whole
Wet and cold I fold over the slushy erupting concoction
My body digs into the air and stares onward
Neither liquid or solid
My lungs have sung so many Gorillaz songs that sometimes I cough blood mixed phlegm and spit gaseous fire into orbit
Sore lips, I think I’m chapped in this rapture, captured by rap collapsing in happy ever afters
There is no disaster, only wheezing, pleased laughter
Feel like you were there yourself, work it out, dare (Gorillaz)
It’s cold, but never did no harm, in the hives eyes of this car farm, I carry on and make my way to the train
Stained in my chains
Heart beating graffiti seeds grow under the snow believing in the damp fleeting of the evening home
In the afterglow, the night comes, and light has nowhere to run, spun in the webs of darkness, ebbs the heartless
Cartilage of shattered matter stab the horizon with their silent metal cadavers willow wisping indifferent that they’ve become cities, pity
The cartridges disembark parting with the people, and add to this scrap rapture, clattering into homes and shops and deposits decomposing decorating decimation disassociated
And I wonder if the world looks grey from outer space
I wait patient in the train station, irrigated with irritation, because I missed my places to home, and now I roam the sidewalk tomes, and write these poems
And my future is coming on without me
Because humanity is an ornament of importance, and we’ve passed that cornerstone, unconforming
© 2019 R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)
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Now I’m hearing a hip-hop track behind this clever and fierce piece. Your lines beat on the reader like waves of sound, flowing, alliterative, with intricate rhyme. Stark, unapologetic imagery pulses-“pants pocket orphanage...cold abortion cradles ...cough blood mixed phlegm and spit gaseous fire into orbit”. Love your Onomatopoeia throughout-“patient in the train station, irrigated with irritation”-applause! Dark, violent, vitriolic, personal. Loved the journey your masterfully creative poem/tune took me on. Thank you RJ!
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R.J Calzonetti (SinisterPotatoe)Burlington, Halton, Canada
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Most of my poems can be differing lengths depending on the time you want to spend reading them. You can avoid reading anything brackets, or read it all. If you want an in-between, you can read only th.. more..
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