Hoarse Pillow Talk

Let me know what your biggest fear is.
Let me hear what's in your spirit.
Is it insincere?
Then you dont have to let me know
what your biggest fear is.
We can chill.
Have a beer.
Listen here.
Gimmie there...
Your hand
and press it here.
Against my chest.
Do you hear?
My dear.
You used to be the biggest fear
that haunted my spirit.
And now you're here
laying beside me.
And I fear,
that it has been more than
several years since
I last had you here
lying beside me.
A beat not skipped, there's no talkin'.
Just straight to the unspoken kiss,
the soaken twitch,
the split of a chocolate twix.
Just holding onto the moment
like holding onto your thick waist
that'll only be my death.
Dont speak to me.
Just keep playing,
and playing,
and playing me.
We made the house itch.
So enticing, hot and spicy.
You got my mind movin',
rather yet, hips are groovin'.
Not too quick love, they way
you bounce makes the house itch.
But I said that already and it's
too hot to get down.
I'm too hot to get down.
Now you have to get down
before we both get ill and
slip into the groove love.
Oh lord, I just want to slip right
into your noose.
Slip into your snooze.
A bed full of wolves.
But I'm back for seconds.
And reminiscing over these past seconds,
has me panting and grasping
for your everlasting blessings and embers.
I give up.
I surrender.
This is me lonely in late December.

Author's Note

Love is my poison ivy. Can't help but touch it. No matter how it makes me feel.

Reviews

[Askew]

This is both beautiful and hauntingly somber. I think we all become reminiscent of the past in late December because we're remembering everything the past year has done to us, given us, taken away from us. Missing someone you love while keeping them beside you in the only way they'll be with you is a sad but very real thing that I can relate to.
Well done.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Lexi. It was reminiscent in the sense that a lover from my past recently came back into my life and are beginning to rekindle the flame that was never really relinquished.
Thank you for for adding it to your library, I appreciate it.
-David.

[BBP]

Always dig you writings Sin. Has such a street beat feel to them and I can't help but get in the groove of your writes as I read them.

[sinNsincerity]

That's all I can ask, for you to get in the groove with me and zone out for a moment. Thank you for reading Bev, have a blessed day.
-David

[emmajoy]

Having read your poem, wondered at the depth of some of the phrasing, considered the airiness of other, your Author's note is interesting because somehow it seems flimsier than the wonderful drift of your post. Strange how going back hits home.. tis the hoped for 'meant to be' but is it accidental or fate.. shalt or shan't. You question and answer yourself in your writing, rather think that by the end of quiet a long near treatise, you know exactly how you feel and.. what's ahead.

[sinNsincerity]

'Tis meant to be, and rather if it has to do with fate or just pure chance, I don't care because I'm loving where things are going as of right now and I'm actually happy.
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts Emma, I highly appreciate you.
-David

[Avelina Devi]

A rekindled flame? At least your past has a future, not many get that chance.
Nicely penned. Your words had a good flow throughout.

[sinNsincerity]

The simulation has its ways. If you give your energy, eventually it'll give it back if you play the game correctly.

[Avelina Devi]

That's true in some cases, but sometimes the game has a way of placing obstacles in one's path.

[sinNsincerity]

Then you keep pushing. You're still here as am I.

[Avelina Devi]

If its meant to be then its meant to be.

[sinNsincerity]

Or you can shoot your shot from up close or back outside. Ball is always on your court.

[Angeliki Largatzis]

This is amazing, I love the way your words flow.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you think so Angeliki.

[Dara]

I love this romantic, rock 'n roll em write. It has such a catchy flow with the words and rhythm. Would be a fun poem to read out loud. Upbeat yet very nostalgic with a melancholy tune that so often goes hand in hand with loving. This is a keeper for me. I will want to read it several times over and let it sink in.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it Dara. I do my best to produce something that feels good to read aloud. Thank you for adding it to your library. I appreciate it.

[wordman]

i guess we all reminisce from time to time,could be hazardous thuugh

[sinNsincerity]

Except this wasn't a vision from afar. I recently ran into and rekindle a flame with an old lover from way back and have been ... well ...you know ...

[wordman]

good for you

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. December can make us sing the blues and wish. I liked the thoughts. Making the reader feel the place and understand the emotions. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for always reading John, I appreciate you!
Stay blessed.
-David

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend. I always enjoy your work.

[Abhishek Izy]

This is wonderfully good to read. Subtle yet complex as it weaves into the layers of your minds. I could imagine stuffs you got to say and that my friend is a compliment

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so and reading Abhishek, I appreciate you.
-David