Hoarse Pillow Talk

Let me know what your biggest fear is.
Let me hear what's in your spirit.
Is it insincere?
Then you dont have to let me know
what your biggest fear is.
We can chill.
Have a beer.
Listen here.
Gimmie there...
Your hand
and press it here.
Against my chest.
Do you hear?
My dear.
You used to be the biggest fear
that haunted my spirit.
And now you're here
laying beside me.
And I fear,
that it has been more than
several years since
I last had you here
lying beside me.
A beat not skipped, there's no talkin'.
Just straight to the unspoken kiss,
the soaken twitch,
the split of a chocolate twix.
Just holding onto the moment
like holding onto your thick waist
that'll only be my death.
Dont speak to me.
Just keep playing,
and playing,
and playing me.
We made the house itch.
So enticing, hot and spicy.
You got my mind movin',
rather yet, hips are groovin'.
Not too quick love, they way
you bounce makes the house itch.
But I said that already and it's
too hot to get down.
I'm too hot to get down.
Now you have to get down
before we both get ill and
slip into the groove love.
Oh lord, I just want to slip right
into your noose.
Slip into your snooze.
A bed full of wolves.
But I'm back for seconds.
And reminiscing over these past seconds,
has me panting and grasping
for your everlasting blessings and embers.
I give up.
I surrender.
This is me lonely in late December.

Author's Note

Love is my poison ivy. Can't help but touch it. No matter how it makes me feel.

Reviews

[Askew]

This is both beautiful and hauntingly somber. I think we all become reminiscent of the past in late December because we're remembering everything the past year has done to us, given us, taken away from us. Missing someone you love while keeping them beside you in the only way they'll be with you is a sad but very real thing that I can relate to.
Well done.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Lexi. It was reminiscent in the sense that a lover from my past recently came back into my life and are beginning to rekindle the flame that was never really relinquished.
Thank you for for adding it to your library, I appreciate it.
-David.

[Paul Bell]

Strange thing pillow talk. It used to be you'd light two cigarettes, pass one over and slowly inhale life.
Now we're all health freaks, and pillow talk is down the gym.
Now, if she would walk back into my life, I'm sure I could find that lighter.

[sinNsincerity]

Oh we did share a cig my friend. Not all of us are health nuts hehe.

[Paul Bell]

Knew there were more of us still kicking around

[sinNsincerity]

That's why the title has the word Hoarse in it.

[Paul Bell]

Just assumed that was the action. lol

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

If only I had the skills to rhyme like you! Sometimes, the rhyming can be a bit cheesy for me, but yours was beautiful and flowed well. It was also a bit dark, which I absolutely loved.
"the split of a chocolate twix.
Just holding onto the moment
like holding onto your thick waist
that'll only be my death. "

That was my favorite part! Sexy, beautiful, but also dark. What a great juxtoposition there. I enjoyed this one.

[Diane]

I love this. Very well written and I enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading some more of your work.

[Onlyme]

Reminders of the past. Always haunt or come back. And play on your mind and heart. And echoes of good times past. Play like a record. As does your emotions. As you wish you had them once more. A bittersweet symphony of love lost and gone. But somehow always remains. Even though in your heart and mind you know it was not a good lover but bad.

[Einstein Noodle]

it can be that way can't it?! poison ivy ... sexual addiction does not do the trick more than for the moment eh!? mostly a straight forward spoken experience .. i like the bit about the "twix" ... puts it in a modern time frame ;) the repetition doesn't seem as strong as repetition can be .. it is always a risk using it .. this is most assuredly sexy and hot ... a bit on the graphic side for me personally but very steamy! i think how she takes his hand and shows him is powerful .. it tells me a lot about them both as lovers
E.

[Ana B.]

Love the mood of this. As ever, i don't know whether to laugh or be really sad while reading, i'll choose a smile. Playfully honest, love the second part of the poem!!

Your fan.

[sinNsincerity]

You get it. A pleasure as always Ana.

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine poem that races along with its short lines, and a pefect sync of theme and style, so I would advise all to enjoy this, well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Advise on....

[John the Baptist]

Much of this poem comes across to me in a comical way, with many humorous images (How does a house itch, anyway? Moreover, how does it scratch it?). But then there's that last line. Has the whole monologue been taking place in the mind of a lonely individual. Perhaps this one might be labeled tragicomic. Whatever, it's well done.

[sinNsincerity]

Allow your imagination to run free...
Comedy + Tragedy = Horror
amidsummer_snightmare

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Well i guess its better to have loved than not to have- but sometimes uts only one sided or just physical which will never work if you are genuine and one women msn or ine man women- but then again we inly have certain connections with certain people sad when it doesnt work out??? Loved reading🌹

[Robert Trakofler]

f**k yes, this is awesome and real, great great flowing in here authentic and exposing i love your lack of ego in writing this and just throwing it out like this. You have an excellent self philosophy and it shines thru in your words. I enjoyed this very much!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you B.B., I highly appreciate what you have to say.