Whip, Beat, and Mix

The night Owl.

Out N about.

Out on the prowl.

I clown N play in the wind.

Had a cow N then I

took a swim and a gaze into a

backwards black top hat,

and now,

I'm Mr. Black Cat.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Do you believe in us?

I believe in meow.

Please my dear,

do you hear my cries?

If not,

believe in my fuss.

What the f**k?

Do you give more than one?

You don’t believe in the Sun,

So you called me out of my rust.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Belief is a must.

Do you hear my Moo?

I couldn’t get enough of You,

so I danced and waned into

the last night of your Doom.

Your crescent moon smile

had just all of the right grooves

that whisked me back into the

lite light.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world.

I'm air again.

I play in the wind.

I can't wait for you

to summon me again.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

we all do need someone don't we!? https://youtu.be/N5jlPL1tNDY
i like the Alice in Wonderland hints .. the Cheshire Cat so memorable in all of the adventures there ...out of all your lines this one strikes me hardest:
"I'm air again." in all the want, needing and pleading ...that line flew me away like fresh breaths ;)
E.

[sinNsincerity]

Poetry is my only love.
Iv'e been reading a lot of Latin American writer's and their use of magical realism, and have been trying to incorporate that in my poetry.
There's a South Korean Woman Named Han Kang who wrote The Fruit of My Woman that is so amazing.
Check it out...
https://granta.com/the-fruit-of-my-woman/

[Einstein Noodle]

i will do that...thank you so much! there is so much to get excited about in poetry ..."magical realism"! how cool!

[.]

The flow of my poems has been something ive been working on and this poem has rhythms and flow down pat. I enjoyed this poem

[sinNsincerity]

And you will find and master that as you continue to write and study it.

[Fanicia E.]

The whimsical tone of this poem made it a very enjoyable read.

[sinNsincerity]

I hope you never forget.

[Leslie Philibert]

Lots of mix here, street talk, rhymes, line length...a poem that shows you can write !

[sinNsincerity]

'Twas my pleasure Leslie.

[wordman]

a magic man,from an owl to a cow,then a black tie event,my the time just went

[sinNsincerity]

...Phew...

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Sometimes bring away with the fairies is the best place to be where we can be one with the dance of our emotions- we wait for the next round- as if we need to reassure ourselves that we’ve been found and not rejected but need to come to terms at times that some things are best left alone- 🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Rejection is a non issue for me and I leave nothing alone, but I guess I could sit alone in a corner in the dark ...
And after reading this book on Irish folklore put together by W.B Yeats, I would not like to meet; yet alone, be alone with fairies.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Each to their own and goodness and happiness is all that certain beings bring- sometimes thoughts and truths are twisted to make people believe which is not actually true- but then each has their own truth-🌹

[Anonymous]

Oh wow! I loved this! Your rhythm and flow were spot on, and I loved your use of the implied allusion of the Cheshire cat, so many great connotations!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sami, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
-David

[Mikku]

Lovely picture of a feeling so rare yet when imprisoned within this heart may enslave the soul. Very well written

[Groovygirl17]

A poem I feel everyone can relate to from some point of time in his or her life. Enjoyed the read :)

[sinNsincerity]

And why is that?

[Groovygirl17]

The sense of desperation. In terms of lost love (my personal take on the poem - in the mindset I’m currently reading it in) I can relate to the emotions and the feeling of grasping for something that almost seems out of touch, out of reality. Almost to the brink of insanity.

[sinNsincerity]

May it be tat I am outside of reality?
Outside of sanity?
Magic . . .

[Groovygirl17]

Exactly, my friend.

[boygene borice]

I feel it within me. I adore your writing :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Boygene, I'm really appreciate it.