Whip, Beat, and Mix

The night Owl.

Out N about.

Out on the prowl.

I clown N play in the wind.

Had a cow N then I

took a swim and a gaze into a

backwards black top hat,

and now,

I'm Mr. Black Cat.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Do you believe in us?

I believe in meow.

Please my dear,

do you hear my cries?

If not,

believe in my fuss.

What the f**k?

Do you give more than one?

You don’t believe in the Sun,

So you called me out of my rust.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world

Belief is a must.

Do you hear my Moo?

I couldn’t get enough of You,

so I danced and waned into

the last night of your Doom.

Your crescent moon smile

had just all of the right grooves

that whisked me back into the

lite light.

Talk to me girl

Talk me out of this whirl

Talk me out of this world.

I'm air again.

I play in the wind.

I can't wait for you

to summon me again.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

we all do need someone don't we!? https://youtu.be/N5jlPL1tNDY
i like the Alice in Wonderland hints .. the Cheshire Cat so memorable in all of the adventures there ...out of all your lines this one strikes me hardest:
"I'm air again." in all the want, needing and pleading ...that line flew me away like fresh breaths ;)
E.

[sinNsincerity]

Poetry is my only love.
Iv'e been reading a lot of Latin American writer's and their use of magical realism, and have been trying to incorporate that in my poetry.
There's a South Korean Woman Named Han Kang who wrote The Fruit of My Woman that is so amazing.
Check it out...
https://granta.com/the-fruit-of-my-woman/

[Einstein Noodle]

i will do that...thank you so much! there is so much to get excited about in poetry ..."magical realism"! how cool!

[Minnie]

Another great piece! Well done! Love the alice in wonderland reference

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Cute repetition
with links in mind
as it progresses

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So great! I always marvel at your writing and your rants. Love the sense of being over the edge lost in the insanity. As always, keep sharing

[Mr. Malarkey]

This is cleverly written, and it flows along quite nicely. From a owl, to a cat, then a cow, and finally the wind. Thanks for sharing!

[Luci]

This is sooo fun! "I believe in meow" - this really made me giggle. Thank you for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it made you giggle Luci. Cat's only meow at humans.

[bella brown]

wow I like it, it made me feel so much love when you did this poem well done

[sinNsincerity]

I'm all about love

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words and thoughts. You took the reader with your wild journey and wild places. Play the wind for love. Would be cool. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Always a pleasure Sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and I liked this poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Everything magical happens by the light of the moon. Shining bright in a dark velvet sky. I sense a dark desperation here, where the writer is desperate to engage. Imagination running wild, with strong imagery. Your style is quite different from other poetry I have read on this site.

Chris

[sinNsincerity]

I am a Cancer*69, so it is only right that the moon speaks to and through me.
Look up Magical Realism and you'll get somewhat of an idea where my style comes from. I do try stand out from everyone else by being myself and sharing what I think and love.
I'm glad you had enjoyed it Christine.

[Katelyn Kennedy]

I really like how you gave the ending quite an eerie feel by using "summon". It made me look at your poem differently, in a good way.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Katelyn.

[Riddhi]

I liked it...The flow of your poem was really nice..I indeed liked it..I am eager to read more of your works..Keep on writing..
Riddhi

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Riddhi.