The Socratic Doomer

I never thought that you would

wander right back into my life.

Sure did wish it.

I prayed on it.

I slaved in it.

My Mrs. Demon.

I never thought that you would

come back into my light to pull

me out of the dark.

Sure did wish it

I prayed on it.

I slaved in it.

What did you do?

Yes you.

Look at what you do.

Look at how you're treating me.

I don't believe in me.

You are my doom.

A soft spoken guillotine that let loose of

the noose and then re-commenced the

beheading of my heavy heaven heart.

Hell.

At one point,

sure did wish for this.

I prayed for this.

I slaved for this.

But now,

what have we done?

But I still love you hon,

and you know this.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

such a painful tragedy to be stuck in ... cycling as a slave chained to the grinding wheel ... by self ... over and over the bits of heart shards ... ouch! very graphic read for me ..i feel this one ..tho just a "fond" memory now ... at the time pretty intense ;))
E.

[sinNsincerity]

Stuck inpain...chained to the tragedy is my wheel...

[Einstein Noodle]

:( ............................. well said my friend!

[sette]

a painful poem with all the hurts and anger as well.. the title in itself is intriguing reminds me of the socratic code "know thyself". but when it comes to love, we tend to forget everything especially ourselves. nice piece of writing.

[sinNsincerity]

thyself is knowing...inLove...I can never forget.

[liltornado]

I know what it's like to be enslaved in such feelings. Great write, really felt this one.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for feeling.

[Alecia]

Perfect 👌Would make a great song !!!

[sinNsincerity]

Would you sing it?

[wordman]

weird situation,we wish and hope then it happens and we ask ourselves why

[sinNsincerity]

I'm pretty Weird Ron hehe

[wordman]

i haven`t noticed lol

[¿]

Expressing wishes and truth in poetic way is greater than any scattered words!!
I didn't enjoyed it, I read and felt.
The love you're expressing about.😊

[sinNsincerity]

I use my pain to create art.

[¿]

Which I've never or can't!! Powerful u....

[sinNsincerity]

You can, you just gotta dig for it and not be afraid of what you find.