Cut Me Deep

I tap into you

to tap in to me.

Breath out then breath out.

I forget to take a moment to let you in.

That's just the way my breathing

flows.

Can't you see?

Just my cup of tea.

Enter my soul.

You cut me deep.

The deeds of your heart's

teeth has left me a

mouthful of cavities.

Tummy growling,

Have you had enough to eat?

Haven't you had enough of me?

Have you had me,

you wouldn't need

Me.

Finaly,

Love

Me.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

[sinNsincerity]

That's beautiful E.N.

[Cherrie Palmer]

the codependence of the heart, bites. You expose raw emotion, crying out, and hoping for love.

[sinNsincerity]

Egyptian kings and queens died with their wealth in their tomb.
But wherever they ended up in the afterlife, their riches weren’t there.

What I am keeping will come with me.
In any lifetime.
As long as I keep them, and keep them pure.

Inner wealth can never be taxed.
Only multiplied.

[Cherrie Palmer]

You are on a roll today :) keep the words flowing.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Inner wealth can never be taxed, only multiplied
could be your next poem

[sinNsincerity]

I will have to dwell and meditate on that.
I usually don't attack a poem.
I let it come thru me and and take possession . . .

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes, that's my approach as well

[Norbanus]

The sins and my sincerity
Leapt deftly from what's said
But what the hell, I’ll never tell
Just one more thing to dread

Once more comes words of wisdom,
from the center of the stage
We see the folly of assume
Life’s verses smear the page

So should we find we disagree
what is the chosen fix?
We’ll try to see, twixt you and me
which one of us to nix.

Of course my friend, if you’ll make room
I’ll join your search for doom.

[sinNsincerity]

I am a doomer indeed.
Used to be a starchaser, but
I've went

[Mikku]

"enter my soul" "you cut me deep"...awesome lines..loved it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Mikku, I'm glad you'd did

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Love must be balanced the same weight in either side of the scale- cannot be forced if true and never hungers in completeness- wonderful words with a difference🌹

[sinNsincerity]

I hear that.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

[sinNsincerity]

.......😍😶😱

[AYVID N]

I very thought provoking write sinNsincerity. My hunger disappears if someone asks me to love them, if I know I affect them deeply.

[sinNsincerity]

What if the hunger isn't a physical one?

[AYVID N]

Then that would be intimidating :)

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so, indeed. 🤓