Eye of W***e-Us VS Osiris

My battery is depleted.

The Son hasn't been giving

me the energy that is needed.

Ra, are you jealous that my mind

is possessed and obsessed by the light

of Osiris (Witch) was lost by the game of dice?

Sirius,

Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.

Moon's bright hides the dark sky

and summons the dark from my inside.

Star Light.

Lord of love.

Lord of silence.

Will Machik be used by Isis to

rekindle the flame that was once mine?

Why has it taken you so long to

deliver me back a piece of my life?

Be my guest.

Be my quest.

Be my chest.

No Peace

Just the pieces of me that have been

ripped apart and scattered.

And I'm tired of being kept quite

when speaking on BE/Half of my broken heart.

Author's Note

So mote it be
The Black Cat

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is some of the most creative imagery I have read in some time... your poetic voice is truly unique!

[sinNsincerity]

Why it's my pleasure.

[Tiffany K Charles]

I think you should do a short story in the scheme... I'd love to see how it would turn out.

[poetgurl]

Such a Craft leaves me Wicked.
Moon's bright hides the dark sky
and summons the dark from my inside.
Star Light.
Lord of love.
Lord of silence.

I so loved this part this is really good. amazing write here.

[Ana B.]

Gah, I'm a sucker for ancient mythology, divine poetry dear David, as always, a new addition for my library :) happy holidays!

[sinNsincerity]

As am I, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it Ana. Always a pleasure to know you did. Happy Holidays to you as well!

[Nora]

As Egyptian , i can tell you that l loved this piece 😊 , using of Egyptian gods names make it more interesting :))

[Einstein Noodle]

what a challenging, interesting mix of clever word play, Egyptian gods and human frailty ... this one is beyond me ken ...but the sense of brokenness is strong in your closing ...
E.

[LR]

This is very creative! What a fresh idea to start a poem

[Asante]

Damn, bro. The wordplay here is STRONG--from the use of near-rhymes, to the way this flowed together in theme and in continuity from beginning to end. Speaking of the end, those last eight lines? Forget about it.

This gave me strong Lupe vibes, and he's one of my favorite MC's so that's saying a lot.

Digging this in a big way, man.

[Alex Ware]

How emotional, it's true that a lot of people would prefer us to keep quiet when expressing our grief and frustrations at the world.

[Eleña ♥..]

this was amazing. like always
;D

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks Elena, how have you been?