Heart Arrest

I have wandering eyes,

A wandering soul,

I wonder where to start?

Of all the days,

Please don't walk away...

Just go!

My SiN is a cent.

Sent within this

Piggy bank of a heart.

Here goes a kiss...

Not hell bent,

But we resist the heaven sent.

Take a sip,

Can you taste it?

Let me wipe my lips.

I love your hips.

Pardon my lisp,

But it's quite obvious

That I'm vomiting this s**t.

More like magik!

More organized -

Sex never circumcised

Because we run it all night.

Come to the other side.

The darkside.

This is where my mind rest.

A penny for your thought?

Does that make sense?

And I'm getting nice,

Quite precise.

I'm 9th.

Did you wander?

'Cause I'm your wonder.

I've paid for this weight

That lays beneath your gaze.

The image of your soul dwells and swells...

Hard not soft.

Fall in love.

I'll be your rock bottom.

Please, let me catch you.

Trap___

But it's a secret,

And I can keep it.

Never have to lie,

Never public,

Never forcing the passion

Because there's never a doubt.

This is seduction.

Spill something.

Are you drunk yet?

Because this climax has you erected,

When staring at your reflection.

Are you feeling something?

I'll say it again...

This is seduction.

A comfortable stew,

A comfortable mood,

A comfortable view.

Let me not confuse you,

I want to peruse you,

I don't want to bruise,

Use,

Or lose you...

Author's Note

TWA
Gothspel

Reviews

[Jenny]

Reading this I struggled to decide if I liked the way it read. I'd lose myself in your flow and rhythm and then it would change. Then I'd pick up another pace all for it to change again. And then I realised that is what I love about this. And you never set the pace in the same way which was wonderful. So more than just saying how beautiful this is, I'd say that your delivery is just as enchanting as the story.
(i liked reading aloud even more than in my head)

Thanks for sharing!
J

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty awesome to hear, I wrote that opening line to foreshadow just that as the stream of consciousness expands. I try to set things up and pull it away which creates the changes and the rhythm is never the same. I want it to let the readers mind travel down several paths in their own mind with each read. I would hope and love to hear that readers read my work aloud because that's how I feel it should be read to hear the sounds I place in the poem. I'm really glad to hear that is what you loved.

[Jenny]

deep thinking!
i like that you put so much thought and effort into not only your work but the way that it is presented.

J

[Asante]

Your pieces have a certain mix of flow and depth that I can say I'm glad I've discovered. Awesome work, brother.

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks man, I appreciate that. It's Kinda like a house of mirrors...
Your stuff is dead a*s nice as well.

[gentlekindness]

I really like this poem. Beautiful texture and interweaving of thoughts and emotions.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Annie, I enjoy your blog btw.

[gentlekindness]

Your welcome. Looking forward to reading more.

[Jamestown]

Another great piece my friend,
I could definitely feel the emotion and deep desire within
the words, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks brother, stay blessed.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and without pretense, a most telling piece that guides one to follow emotion within the context of frailty, well done, good read.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you thought so Thomas.

[Elmarie]

Hi a cleverly emotional poem about the way you will love someone. It's easy to read and I found if flowed nicely.

Blessing

El

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Elmarie!

[Nina H.]

Wow, such an interesting piece! Really like the intensity behind it. Very nicely written. Great work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm glad that you'd enjoyed it Nina.

[D]

Well, first one of yours I've read. Kinda have to get used to your style. As for this write, it was intriguing to say the least. Very well penned.

[sinNsincerity]

No worries, I can't even get used to it. It's always morphing.

[D]

Well, that's great, because the possibilities are endless (:

[GalaxyGhost]

This is such an intriguing poem and it pulls readers along.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!

[wordman]

lots of quotes put into a poem,creative

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Sir Ron!

[sheandherself]

"I'll be your rock bottom." I really like this...it's so intensive, yet softly served. Interesting.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, yea, that line is killer isn't it?