Heart Arrest

I have wandering eyes,

A wandering soul,

I wonder where to start?

Of all the days,

Please don't walk away...

Just go!

My SiN is a cent.

Sent within this

Piggy bank of a heart.

Here goes a kiss...

Not hell bent,

But we resist the heaven sent.

Take a sip,

Can you taste it?

Let me wipe my lips.

I love your hips.

Pardon my lisp,

But it's quite obvious

That I'm vomiting this s**t.

More like magik!

More organized -

Sex never circumcised

Because we run it all night.

Come to the other side.

The darkside.

This is where my mind rest.

A penny for your thought?

Does that make sense?

And I'm getting nice,

Quite precise.

I'm 9th.

Did you wander?

'Cause I'm your wonder.

I've paid for this weight

That lays beneath your gaze.

The image of your soul dwells and swells...

Hard not soft.

Fall in love.

I'll be your rock bottom.

Please, let me catch you.

Trap___

But it's a secret,

And I can keep it.

Never have to lie,

Never public,

Never forcing the passion

Because there's never a doubt.

This is seduction.

Spill something.

Are you drunk yet?

Because this climax has you erected,

When staring at your reflection.

Are you feeling something?

I'll say it again...

This is seduction.

A comfortable stew,

A comfortable mood,

A comfortable view.

Let me not confuse you,

I want to peruse you,

I don't want to bruise,

Use,

Or lose you...

Author's Note

TWA
Gothspel

Reviews

[Jenny]

Reading this I struggled to decide if I liked the way it read. I'd lose myself in your flow and rhythm and then it would change. Then I'd pick up another pace all for it to change again. And then I realised that is what I love about this. And you never set the pace in the same way which was wonderful. So more than just saying how beautiful this is, I'd say that your delivery is just as enchanting as the story.
(i liked reading aloud even more than in my head)

Thanks for sharing!
J

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty awesome to hear, I wrote that opening line to foreshadow just that as the stream of consciousness expands. I try to set things up and pull it away which creates the changes and the rhythm is never the same. I want it to let the readers mind travel down several paths in their own mind with each read. I would hope and love to hear that readers read my work aloud because that's how I feel it should be read to hear the sounds I place in the poem. I'm really glad to hear that is what you loved.

[Jenny]

deep thinking!
i like that you put so much thought and effort into not only your work but the way that it is presented.

J

[raven]

the fusion of emotions and high intensity thoughts are very well combined and put into words. The flow is very natural and i like how they form when you speak them. a very good job indeed. keep it up!

[sinNsincerity]

A pleasure Rea, I'm glad you'd enjoyed it!

[raven]

pleasure was mine :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Quite perplexed but the thoughts are deep, intense and filled with a certain desire. I appreciate the way you managed to put questions here, the structure was good along with the length.. where as I believe you could have let the whole piece be a little more simple as some of the lines are not properly understandable and thus, stop the flow of the poem... anyway, very good read...
Anindita : )

[sinNsincerity]

Your appreciation is highly valued. Thank you for reading Anindita!

[Anindita Janhabee]

most welcome... : )

[Akshita]

That's quite beautiful, you know.😖

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!