Merlin's Miracles

I found the beauty
And the beast
Inside of me.
My Bellerose...
Shores pulling away from tides
Like the 6 from the 9,
But I believe in the 3,
And that's the love
I hold inside of me.
That's my heart's sacrifice,
I lust for virtue and vice.
It's unruling to be still,
But still...
I'm still;
And it slays...
Like that 1 thing I ride away in
When it snows.
And it's cold.
And this sweater will
Never comfort this hole.
And I'm the one.
That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain.
Mimos...Ugh...
I dare you to say you don't want to get you some.

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the logic and tales inside the poem.
"That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain. "
The above tale was my favorite. No-one does things the easy ways. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

No siree, I'm always trying to give you guys something new.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well.

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

Sigh. You just...... I can never find words to review your writing. Your words are memorizing.

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty sweet hehe, I'm glad to hear so!

[KWP]

some would say cocky - I sayI like the fact that you are backing yourself, so man don't ...

nice rhythm

X

[sinNsincerity]

Not cocktail at all, I'm just curious hehe.
Thank you so much!

[Asante]

This was a great piece to read aloud. Impeccable timing, and your use of imagery was nothing to sneeze at whatsoever. Great work, man!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bro, I write in a way so the sounds create such a pleasure when read aloud.

[Asante]

You and I have that all he way in common then, bro. It was a pleasure to read.

[Davidvenomous]

Like warm butter baby... some slick writing.

It could be 1983 Indonesian stereo instructions, I'd still read the s**t out if it if it was in this format.

[sinNsincerity]

Slick like oil

[Davidvenomous]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB9PiW68yQg

[PhoenixDown]

different from your other works, imo. A tad more "controlled." I dig your style though.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I dig you too.

[PaintedBirdy]

i like how you portray these several dualities within the narrator, "inside of me." beauty and beast, shores and tides, 6 and 9, virtue and vice, 1 and hole (a visual number zero). and the sequence of actions is interesting too, "pulling away" then "still" then "travels deeper." and all this internal conflict is resolved in what appears to be the real-world action of getting mimosas, haha, (mimos...ugh...). why not wake up and start drinking after all that! i like the imagery all throughout this poem. thanks for sharing it!

[sinNsincerity]

Yea, I try to incorporate so many elements within a single snap9...
Thank you for reading, I'm really glad you had enjoyed it.

[RaeAlyn]

"And I suppo5e" was that an intentional thing. Otherwise interesting poem. Good job.

I wish that you'd read and review my new story "Olympia High School". I'd be appreciative.

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, very much so. Everything I do is very intentional

[zaisham9393]

I enjoyed reading it.Pleasure to read your work.

Thank You so much for sharing :)!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Zaisha, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[Cara]

i like it, thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm glad that you did.