Merlin's Miracles

I found the beauty
And the beast
Inside of me.
My Bellerose...
Shores pulling away from tides
Like the 6 from the 9,
But I believe in the 3,
And that's the love
I hold inside of me.
That's my heart's sacrifice,
I lust for virtue and vice.
It's unruling to be still,
But still...
I'm still;
And it slays...
Like that 1 thing I ride away in
When it snows.
And it's cold.
And this sweater will
Never comfort this hole.
And I'm the one.
That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain.
Mimos...Ugh...
I dare you to say you don't want to get you some.

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the logic and tales inside the poem.
"That black rabbit that travels deeper
Than he needs to go...
And there I went...
And I suppo5e,
I'm the champion of pain. "
The above tale was my favorite. No-one does things the easy ways. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

No siree, I'm always trying to give you guys something new.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well.

[James]

One of the best I've read in a while. I felt a lot of internal struggle, something we can all relate...right and wrong...a struggle to belong.

Very nice.

[sinNsincerity]

A struggle of the Gothspel...

[Daisy]

An exceptional write! A very powerful poem with a thought-provoking meaning. Loved it !

[sinNsincerity]

Always..........

[Ana B.]

Lovely to read and ''feel''. Exceptional addition to my library :)

[sinNsincerity]

Such a pleasure to hear so Ana, God bless!

[Samantha Jenkins]

I love how you added the tales, made me want to read all of your stuff.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, you should read more of my stuff. you won't be disappointed...

[T. Edana Talbott]

I feel like your poems could easily be made into songs - really awesome, songs too.
Your flow and rhythm is perfect and makes reading your words all the more enjoyable.

[sinNsincerity]

I highly appreciate that Edana, although, I still need much more studying to pursue song writing. That's neverrr out of reach though...

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Bit by bit, I could imagine the picture you portrayed through words.
Simple and nice. Thumbs up!

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty sweet.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece that guards power within wording and logic, a most telling prose, one to be re-read at will, well done, good read.

[sinNsincerity]

'Twas my pleasure!

[Nina H.]

Very well written. From beginning to end it keeps you captivated. Keep writing.

[sinNsincerity]

So glad to hear so Nina.

[Adorkable Neko]

I love the way this flows, like an ocean wave upon the shore. The ebb and flow of this piece is mesmerizing. Simply incredible my dear.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I do it all for y'all!

[wordman]

well my friend,just tell it like it is

[sinNsincerity]

Will do sir