Give Me End

The one who says she really loves me,

Is the one I can't have yet.

And she knows this.

Polarity is frozen.

Yet; Love is my target,

So allow me to zone in.

But is there another way to love you?

Is there?

Let me share 'em with you,

I'm who.

Who?

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Call me Mr. Marlboro,

But I'm your toy

#Hasbro

Ouija?

No-

Just  Wicca-

Pedia mind.

But please take the time

To undefine the bottom line.

Do you mind if I incline

You the opportunity to just mind?

Ajar, I'll leave your heart at far...

But so far...

My poetry is leading me further away from she,

So it's hard to love anyone

'Till I'm DONE

Author's Note

Gothspel

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. The woman I speak on, we have been knowing each other for eight years now, but we both know we are soul mates. Just patiently waiting for the timing to be right.
Your analysis was dead on.

[Emily]

Awesome job on the flow of this piece! I like how you did the formatting as well.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily, I'm glad that you did.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Playful in manner and fun to read!

[annalysiar]

Amazingly done. I love the flow

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Anna, I'm glad that you did.

[annalysiar]

I wonder how you know to call me anna...and you spelt it right...

[sinNsincerity]

The spirits told me hehe jk
It's in your profile name annlysiar, so I figured your name was Anna. ;D

[annalysiar]

Lol perceptive. 😉

[sinNsincerity]

Just a tad bit.

[annalysiar]

It's ok everyone has their moments. The spirits go a long way😉

[sinNsincerity]

Too long if you ask me...

[annalysiar]

Lol what would make you say that??

[sinNsincerity]

Don't get me wrong, I hold tremendous patience, but I just always seek greatness and love things to come to life sooner than later...

[annalysiar]

The greatest and most beautiful magics take time.
As does perfrction. Hence the saying: good things come to those who wait. Or patience is a virtue.
And great things sometimes come in the smallest gestures. Rather than grand ones😉

[sinNsincerity]

Yes indeed, the small gestures is what I'm all about these days...

[annalysiar]

Youre notnalone there

[sinNsincerity]

Glad to hear so =D

[annalysiar]

Just doing my honest duty,😉😊😁

[NathanielAlexander]

This is a great piece of work. As I got to the end a grin emerged on my face, which is what I love when I read, I love to have emotion drawn out of me. I really look forward to reading more of your work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nathaniel, it is my pleasure and I'm glad that I was able to get such a reaction out of you!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

I really like the message of this one

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Crystal, I'm glad that you do.

[EssenceofDaringx]

This was an adventure. It flowed very nicely, and I enjoyed all the hidden little plays on words.

[sinNsincerity]

I am very glad that you did- Thank you!
-David

[Susana Puente]

Breath taking and confussing.marlboro??ciggerets??
To me it was like breakin it off with that nasty habbit of smoking!
But thats just me!!!nice!

[sinNsincerity]

A habit that I posses...

[Jane Elizabeth]

This piece kept a very pleasing tempo. Great job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm glad you thought so Jane.

[Reason4Rissa]

sounds like a conflict of heart break, and desperation. its sad, i wish people didnt have to go through that. but very unique writing style.

[sinNsincerity]

Maybe four years ago, but this is beyond heart break and desperation, it's destiny!